Mr SA has taken mine and his friend advise on and updated his profile. Not only that, but he has asked me to review it.
I would have to give him a B+, for effort. It is far less negative than it was but he still has far too much information and a few cringy lines, nothing that can't be sorted. I guess I'll try to have a proper look at it over the weekend. The question is... should I charge him for it or get him to pay me in nature?
By nature I meant brunch! You have such a deviant mind!